Life In 19x19
http://prod.lifein19x19.com/

11 kyu OGS
http://prod.lifein19x19.com/viewtopic.php?f=4&t=13533		 Page 1 of 1
Author:  NewSentiment [ Mon Aug 29, 2016 5:23 pm ]
Post subject:  11 kyu OGS
Hello, I'm a bit new to this forum and I was wondering if any stronger player is willing to review my game I played recently on OGS. I'm black in this game, thanks in advance!

Attachments:
JoseDavidMurcia-NewSentiment.sgf [3.02 KiB]
Downloaded 393 times
Author:  EdLee [ Mon Aug 29, 2016 8:08 pm ]
Post subject: 
Author:  EdLee [ Mon Aug 29, 2016 8:09 pm ]
Post subject: 
Hi NS,

:b19: This bump is good for W. ( Not good for B. )

:w20: W is happy to stand up, to D9.

:b25: Hmm... The local vital points: F8 (hane), and F9 (extend) --
If B hanes F8, W may cut at F9, so you have to ready to fight.
If B extends F9, there's no cut.

:b35: You may not have time to reply. Maybe turn at H6.

:b43: How about K4 ?

:b47: Did you read out the capture race before you on decided this move ?
H2 kills W -- simple and good.

:b61: Did you read S3-S2-S4 variation ?

:b77: P8.
Author:  NewSentiment [ Tue Aug 30, 2016 12:20 am ]
Post subject:  Re: 11 kyu OGS
Hey Ed Lee,

Thanks very much for taking the time to comment on my game. I know my mid game isn't the best, reinforced by your advice, and I'm really bad with life and death. I think the real downfall in this game for me was the corner invasions. After losing both the bottom and top right, white is safely ahead in points.
Author:  EdLee [ Tue Aug 30, 2016 1:10 am ]
Post subject: 
Hi NS,

You're welcome. Just take it one step at a time.

With more reviews, some themes will emerge.
You mentioned L&D, yes; corners, yes.
The usual suspects: basic shapes, basic tesujis,
basic L&D, basic contact fights, basic fighting skills,
vital points, basic josekis, basic capture race, etc.
( I only looked at your game up to around :b77: -- because of time;
the rest of the game should include more of the above elements. )

Baby steps. :)
Page 1 of 1 All times are UTC - 8 hours [ DST ]
Powered by phpBB © 2000, 2002, 2005, 2007 phpBB Group
http://www.phpbb.com/